Name : PUTRI PARHA RAEHANA Reg. No. : A1D412019 I think the story published by group 6 good, because they tell about the history of Liang kabori Muna area, where people who do not know about this history, they will automatically know and readers are more interested because they get the information .. yahh like me!!!. And my advice, after drawing of group 6 should have no explanation to make it more interesting. thank you
name : sri wahyuni handayani reg.no. : A1 D4 12 038
I think this story is good, because your purpose is to select a story that more outsiders who know more about the history of the liang kabori area muna. and my advice, make this story more interesting for the reader to be more interested to read it. thank you
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Name : PUTRI PARHA RAEHANA
Reg. No. : A1D412019
I think the story published by group 6 good, because they tell about the history of Liang kabori Muna area, where people who do not know about this history, they will automatically know and readers are more interested because they get the information .. yahh like me!!!. And my advice, after drawing of group 6 should have no explanation to make it more interesting. thank you
name : sri wahyuni handayani
reg.no. : A1 D4 12 038
I think this story is good, because your purpose is to select a story that more outsiders who know more about the history of the liang kabori area muna. and my advice, make this story more interesting for the reader to be more interested to read it. thank you
Name: ika endang siti maryati
Stambuk: A1D412039
My comment
This story verry interesting. Used past tense is ok. But, why your group not write down where this story happened.
Thanks
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